Talk:Conductor Israel Yinon dies after collapsing on stage

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Revision 3203748 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:14, 31 January 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Seemed like there were several passages rather similar to source; I tried nudged them away slightly, but what you really want is to say things in a completely difference way (while keeping everything strictly verifiable), which isn't something a reviewer can do heavily without disqualifying themself from review. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

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His name is misspelled in "Yinnon was quoted as saying..." Heavy Water (talk) 16:32, 17 June 2023 (UTC)

Corrected four instances of incorrect spelling. [₂₄Cr][talk] 22:46, 28 June 2023 (UTC)