Talk:Fire breaks out at Chester Zoo, England
Add topicReview of revision 4452185 [Not ready]
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Revision 4452185 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:15, 17 December 2018 (UTC).
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Revision 4452185 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:15, 17 December 2018 (UTC).
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- Btw, we will need to change this headline; it ought to be a sentence, in present tense and preferably active voice, stating the most important and unique thing about the focal event. Feel free to suggest something here on the talk page, and we can take care of that for you (the wiki software won't let you rename pages yet, as your account here is so new). --Pi zero (talk) 00:18, 17 December 2018 (UTC)
New title
[edit]OK, here are some suggestions;
- Fire breaks out at Chester zoo, England
- England:Chester zoo experiences a fire
- (Chester zoo (England):)Fire breaks out in UK's largest zoological building
Qwerty number1 (talk) 08:53, 17 December 2018 (UTC)
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