Talk:Former US President Donald Trump pleads not guilty to 34 felony charges in Manhattan

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Revision 4719810 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:00, 7 April 2023 (UTC).[reply]

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Revision 4719810 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:00, 7 April 2023 (UTC).[reply]
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Not a problem. The Guardian and PBS News Hour sources also say that Trump pleaded not guilty. Hit "CTRL-F" "guilty" and you'll see it right away. The sources don't have to have the same focal event as the Wikinews article. They just have to support the existence of that focal event. Darkfrog24 (talk) 17:15, 7 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I saw they did. While PILLARS doesn't explicitly say this, I am only quoting reviewers with experience, though the pages I remember seeing this on have since been deleted. Maybe I'm wrong, SVTCobra? --Heavy Water (talk) 17:29, 7 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Would you like to see a precedent? I remember drafting articles with this kind of sourcing, but I remember which ones made it through review and which were left out for other reasons. Darkfrog24 (talk) 17:41, 7 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
OK, sure. Heavy Water (talk) 17:44, 7 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I would agree with Darkfrog24 here. This could quickly be added, however, instead of having a protracted debate. SVTCobra 17:47, 7 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Where?[edit]

What if people don't know where Manhattan is? Just putting out there... 64.39.81.54 (talk) 18:42, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The state is explicitly stated in the first sentence, and "Former US President" is used as a qualifier for Trump in the headline. Heavy Water (talk) 18:53, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Ok. 64.39.81.54 (talk) 18:54, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I don't know what I clicked obj??? Anyway oops... 64.39.81.54 (talk) 18:54, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4720762 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4720762 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:48, 10 April 2023 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: This did require much editing for style, verifiability, and distance. And please add categories. See edit history for more.

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Revision 4720762 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:48, 10 April 2023 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: This did require much editing for style, verifiability, and distance. And please add categories. See edit history for more.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
I should add that I remain skeptical of this interpretation of WN:CS (others, see above). --Heavy Water (talk) 23:34, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Edit[edit]

{{editprotected}} Please fix the link for Michael Cohen by retargeting it to Michael Cohen. Heavy Water (talk) 14:54, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

And please capitalize the "p" in "former United States president" per WN:SG#People's titles in general. Heavy Water (talk) 22:50, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done --SVTCobra 12:22, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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