Talk:France fears serial killer responsible for recent murders

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Per Wikinews' style guide, articles should be a minimum of three paragraphs, presented in w:Inverted pyramid structure, and use w:active voice.

It is also recommended, to speed the review process, that you include html comments marking facts and quotes in the article with a note of which specific source they are taken from. Thanks for any help you can give in making reviewing easier! --Brian McNeil / talk 12:48, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

The paragraphs are not in Wikinew style. Look at other examples, like Last Ottoman dies, aged 91. Short paragraphs is a relative term per medium and outlet. In magazine writing, you always look at the style of the organization. It's a good approach in general when you move from one style to another. Crtew (talk) 15:14, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

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