Talk:Gunman attacks Munich shopping centre

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Watching RTE News (Ireland) for updates. German interior minister to speak soon. ProgrammingGeek (talk) 20:21, 22 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@ProgrammingGeek: there are two things I would like to tell you. At this time (21:33, 22 July 2016 (UTC)), this news is not a breaking story (I guess more than four hours has passed) but it doesn't matter much. The second and important thing is, to pass the review, any article must have a minimal length. I am aware of the fact that BBC and Al Jazeera have published news articles having enough information to cross the threshold length. (By the was of you are using the information from a broadcast; instead of {{original}} it is a {{broadcast report}}). Additionally, you can use the {{Germany}} infobox. Create local links; out wikilink using the {{w}} template.[reply]
acagastya 21:33, 22 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@ProgrammingGeek: I hope you won't mind of I edit the story. If there is no development, the story would become Stale.
acagastya 13:43, 23 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4235406 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4235406 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:18, 22 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]

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  • Broadcast reporting requires detailed notes taken at the time, just as other original reporting does, although broadcast reporting is in some other ways not much like other kinds of OR. OR is an advanced technique, not recommended for inexperienced Wikinews contributors.
  • There isn't an obvious call for publishing a below-minimal-length article on this in order to get the news out "fast". Minimal length is considered at least three paragraphs with total text volume equivalent at least to three medium-sized (news) paragraphs.

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Revision 4235406 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:18, 22 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: See below.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not ready: See below.

Comments by reviewer:

  • Broadcast reporting requires detailed notes taken at the time, just as other original reporting does, although broadcast reporting is in some other ways not much like other kinds of OR. OR is an advanced technique, not recommended for inexperienced Wikinews contributors.
  • There isn't an obvious call for publishing a below-minimal-length article on this in order to get the news out "fast". Minimal length is considered at least three paragraphs with total text volume equivalent at least to three medium-sized (news) paragraphs.

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Review of revision 4235622 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4235622 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:08, 23 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • There are three sentences here I haven't been able to verify: the one about Thomas Steinktaus-Koch (I've no idea who that is — the article should explain anyway — and don't see any of the quote anywhere); the one about a beer festival; and the one about highways railway station(s?) and such. Given I've already removed several passages, including a whole paragraph, and done a good deal of copyediting, I'm not comfortable cutting this much in order to publish. Was a source left off the list?

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Revision 4235622 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:08, 23 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • There are three sentences here I haven't been able to verify: the one about Thomas Steinktaus-Koch (I've no idea who that is — the article should explain anyway — and don't see any of the quote anywhere); the one about a beer festival; and the one about highways railway station(s?) and such. Given I've already removed several passages, including a whole paragraph, and done a good deal of copyediting, I'm not comfortable cutting this much in order to publish. Was a source left off the list?

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The answer to the problem is BBC[edit]

@Pi zero: the BBC source mentioned the three unverified information ten hours ago. I am afraid I can't fix anything atm.
acagastya 22:30, 23 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Ah, yes, BBC has a habit of erasing history. Hm. --Pi zero (talk) 22:35, 23 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4235678 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4235678 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:23, 24 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4235678 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:23, 24 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

End of article[edit]

The end of the article states there was an "mass killing by a truck", yet I can't understand how a truck can attack people.--MarlinespikeMate (talk) 08:05, 24 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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