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Latest comment: 1 year ago by Heavy Water in topic Review of revision 4709091 [Passed]

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@DRC-B5: I think this article could use a rename to something more informative, perhaps mentioning the name of the satellite/where it's going/what it will do (also it should be "orbit" not "the orbit"). Heavy Water (talk) 04:52, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

@Heavy Water, shall we name it as "ISRO launches SSLV-D2, deploying 3 satellites including EOS-07 into orbit" DRC-B5 (talk) 04:59, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
Saying "India" is better because we can't assume people will know what the ISRO is, and for the same reason, it's better to spell out "Small Satellite Launch Vehicle". And on second thought, maybe we should remove "including EOS-07" and specify low-earth orbit; the satellite name is meaningless if one doesn't already know it. Heavy Water (talk) 05:20, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
Hmm, then @Heavy Water, it should be renamed as "India launches Small Satellite Launch Vehicle, deploying 3 low-earth orbit satellites" DRC-B5 (talk) 08:54, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
@SVTCobra, please fix the rename issue. I accidentally changed only the talk page. I can't move the main page. DRC-B5 (talk) 09:03, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
It was a little messy, but I think it is fixed. If you see any other redirects still floating around, please tag them for speedy. SVTCobra 14:08, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
Hmm DRC-B5 (talk) 14:11, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

@Heavy Water:, regarding the last rename, are the three satellites not deployed yet? The second paragraph seems to say they are. --SVTCobra 17:38, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

I was looking at the third paragraph: "In this new rocket, ISRO will attempt to sent three satellites..." Apparently that was not updated to reflect that they were deployed. All the sources except the Indian Express did update, so apparently it has happened. Heavy Water (talk) 19:00, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
@SVTCobra: As soon as India launches Small Satellite Launch Vehicle, deploying three low-earth orbit satellites is deleted, I will self-revert. Heavy Water (talk) 19:06, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
I did it as I can do it in one step. SVTCobra 19:41, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
So can you update that third paragraph, DRC-B5? Heavy Water (talk) 19:02, 11 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
Done @Heavy Water DRC-B5 (talk) 01:53, 12 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 4709091 [Passed]

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