Talk:Inter-Korean communication lines restored
@LivelyRatification: Would you like to take a look at this article? Henrymyman (talk) 15:23, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Henrymyman: Sure! Sorry, been a bit disconnected from WN as of late, this must have slipped past me. LivelyRatification (talk) 20:20, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Henrymyman: Just from a cursory look, it seems like the order of information is the wrong way around. The story should probs lead with the lines of communications being restored, and then talk about "Kim Jong-un called for their reopening" after that. Could you make that fix? After that, there shouldn't be an issue with me reviewing. LivelyRatification (talk) 20:22, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- @LivelyRatification: Sure. Henrymyman (talk) 23:26, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- @LivelyRatification: I've added a shorter lede at the beginning to change the information's order like you suggested. Henrymyman (talk) 23:35, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- @LivelyRatification: Sure. Henrymyman (talk) 23:26, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
- @Henrymyman: Just from a cursory look, it seems like the order of information is the wrong way around. The story should probs lead with the lines of communications being restored, and then talk about "Kim Jong-un called for their reopening" after that. Could you make that fix? After that, there shouldn't be an issue with me reviewing. LivelyRatification (talk) 20:22, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
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Revision 4645690 of this article has been reviewed by LivelyRatification (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:05, 6 October 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Some copyediting was done to clarify or improve the flow of the article, see edit history of article for more information. One concern - Bloomberg I believe only gives you a certain amount of free articles per month, and then you're effectively paywalled from the rest of the site. I was able to access that source and verify the information, but in general, please try to use non-paywalled sources unless absolutely necessary, as otherwise information will be unverifiable for reviewers. Otherwise, good work! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4645690 of this article has been reviewed by LivelyRatification (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:05, 6 October 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Some copyediting was done to clarify or improve the flow of the article, see edit history of article for more information. One concern - Bloomberg I believe only gives you a certain amount of free articles per month, and then you're effectively paywalled from the rest of the site. I was able to access that source and verify the information, but in general, please try to use non-paywalled sources unless absolutely necessary, as otherwise information will be unverifiable for reviewers. Otherwise, good work! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
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says not avalible for me. 64.39.87.169 (talk) 23:21, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
- Please see Template:Missing image/message for some addition information. —chaetodipus (talk · contribs) 02:15, 15 October 2021 (UTC)