Talk:Israel confirms death of Hamas leader in Gaza

Review of revision 4802097 [Not ready]

Revision 4802097 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:55, 18 October 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: NPOV: Not ready: No mention of comment or reactions from Hamas, Iran, etc. Style: Not ready: Times must be formatted according to WN:Style. Check punctuation, especially around quotes. Comments by reviewer: Wikinews currently has no policy or guideline regarding AI-generated content. Therefore if AI-generated content is used, it must be backed by sound human editing. Article composition should start by answering the WN:5Ws. In the case of this article's headline, the "What' is 'Israel confirms death of...' and the "When" of that is October 17. October 16 is when Sinwar was killed. The "Why" is also not answered . The image description must be a complete sentence, indicate it is a file photo, and should include {{image}} for attribution, all per WN:Style. The AP News article is better-suited for background information on Sinwar and a second source article should be used to support the focal event. Neutrality in an article such as this is crucial. The article should mention at least Hamas' reaction. Also, we don't use the word 'terrorist' unless we attribute it. For example; 'IDF Spokesman Rear Adm. Daniel Hagari said "He was fleeing from house to house, we identified him as a terrorist, we closed in professionally and eliminated him." Wikinews:Neutrality#Avoiding_phrase_bias There are minor problems with punctuation that could be corrected as part of the review process but given other problems preventing publication and the newness of the original author, it should all be addressed before review to help familiarize one with our policies and guidelines. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4802097 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:55, 18 October 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: NPOV: Not ready: No mention of comment or reactions from Hamas, Iran, etc. Style: Not ready: Times must be formatted according to WN:Style. Check punctuation, especially around quotes. Comments by reviewer: Wikinews currently has no policy or guideline regarding AI-generated content. Therefore if AI-generated content is used, it must be backed by sound human editing. Article composition should start by answering the WN:5Ws. In the case of this article's headline, the "What' is 'Israel confirms death of...' and the "When" of that is October 17. October 16 is when Sinwar was killed. The "Why" is also not answered . The image description must be a complete sentence, indicate it is a file photo, and should include {{image}} for attribution, all per WN:Style. The AP News article is better-suited for background information on Sinwar and a second source article should be used to support the focal event. Neutrality in an article such as this is crucial. The article should mention at least Hamas' reaction. Also, we don't use the word 'terrorist' unless we attribute it. For example; 'IDF Spokesman Rear Adm. Daniel Hagari said "He was fleeing from house to house, we identified him as a terrorist, we closed in professionally and eliminated him." Wikinews:Neutrality#Avoiding_phrase_bias There are minor problems with punctuation that could be corrected as part of the review process but given other problems preventing publication and the newness of the original author, it should all be addressed before review to help familiarize one with our policies and guidelines. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

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just letting y'all know. BigKrow (talk) 15:23, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

. BigKrow Hello, could you help me improve the spelling of this article and simplify it to the English language. Thank you. Pitille02 (talk) 15:41, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

@Pitille02, I think you have it under control, thanks. BigKrow (talk) 15:49, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

I added Iran's reaction and revised the words of the Israeli government against terrorists, and resubmitted it for review, but I found that the Israeli military had released an official clip, so I think the relevant paragraphs of social media should be replaced: Unverified images circulating on social media allegedly showed Sinwar's body. Kitabc12345 (talk) 18:50, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Iranian President Masoud Pezeshkian expressed his condolences regarding the death of Yahya Sinwar sources 1, sources 2. Kitabc12345 (talk) 18:58, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Kitabc12345 Thanks for helping, User:Michael.C.Wright there are possibilities to review it again. Pitille02 (talk) 19:51, 18 October 2024 (UTC)