User talk:Kitabc12345

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-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 11:14, 2 April 2019 (UTC)

Re arrest story

Hi Kitabc12345

An interesting read. Perhaps you can find out when the suspect will appear in court? This sometimes is an opportunity to refresh the story.

Welcome! Is there anything that I can do to help?

Regards, --Gryllida (talk) 20:25, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Re: editing other news

Would you be interested in helping to edit new drafts added by others? Wikinews is looking for volunteers with this, to expedite the peer review process, and to help you gain news writing practice. This is easier than writing a complete story. :) And it may help you with your future writing.

Are you interested? If so, sign up here.

Regards, --Gryllida (talk) 20:32, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

US removes preferential treatment for Hong Kong

Hi. I had some difficulties; review comments. (I do wish I'd been able to get to the review sooner.) --Pi zero (talk) 17:41, 17 July 2020 (UTC)

Thank you, I received it and I will make some changes.--Kitabc12345 (talk) 03:54, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

These videos are accompanied by text below. So don't worry too much lah. I'll keep repairs on the article. -04:27, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

@Pi zero: Hi, I've made some repairs to the article.--Kitabc12345 (talk) 04:36, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

I see that you made some changes. Some key concerns remain, though. The "polarity" of things is often unclear, that is, it's unclear whether they're positive or negative (and toward whom); and the nature of various technical measures is unclear, which also relates to positivity/negativity. The headline, for example, has been improved from

"US removes preferential treatment for Hong Kong"

to

"Trump removes Hong Kong's special status"

but, removing special status... is that something that improves the treatment, or degrades it? More restrictive or less, more favorable or less? I.e., positive or negative? (We'll want to make that "US President Trump", but that's not the main point here.) Similar difficulties apply in the lede and other passages, such as the second paragraph (which has been adjusted to state the circumstances of the remark). I also mentioned, the lede seems a big over-long and over-detailed.

I realize the sorts of things I'm asking for are fairly deep, intensively engaging the meanings of the passages. Truthfully, if the changes needed had been shallow, I might have been able to do them myself in my role as an independent reviewer, rather than requesting revision to the article. But, I do feel we would need to improve these aspects of the article, to produce an article that informs the reader. --Pi zero (talk) 05:09, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

@Pi zero: Eliminating special status is a reduction in treatment and is negative. I've included a link to Wikipedia in the press release, which should help readers to understand it.

I've tried so hard to improve this press release that I can't think of where I should start to improve it. --Kitabc12345 (talk) 09:31, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

Hi

Hello, Kitabc12345. It appears we could not save Trump removes Hong Kong's special status. I am sorry about it. And I would like to help you with what you can do in future. Let me know when you are free. Or please join #wikinews-en ^{live connect} and I can help you.
•–• 01:29, 22 July 2020 (UTC)

Death toll of Aegean Sea earthquake rises to 116; over 1,035 casualties reported

I really wish we'd managed to review this sooner; on review I found some difficulties with it that were outside my reviewer's purview to address, and we now have limited time to revise and re-review the article unless some new development can be used to freshen it up (I remark further on this in the review comments). Review comments; also, as always, detailed history of edits during review. --Pi zero (talk) 20:12, 6 November 2020 (UTC)

Re: First confirmed case of COVID-19 found in Antarctica

Please see feedback below:

• In the first paragraph answer to "when" (what date) is missing. (WN:5W)
• Also, passive voice is present in the first paragraph. Please reword. Please indicate who made the announcement. This is indicated later in the story, but passive voice is discouraged anywhere in the story, and this is also answer to 'Who' (WN:5W).

Please let me know if you would like assistance with any of these modifications. They would need to be made quickly to submit the story for review while it is still fresh. With regards and season greetings, --Gryllida (talk) 01:04, 25 December 2020 (UTC)

P.S. "Fresh' is defined as 'key event happened at most 2-3 days prior to date of publication, or up to a week old with fresh details such as updates available within the last 2-3 days prior to publication.' See WN:Fresh. Thanks Gryllida (talk) 01:07, 25 December 2020 (UTC)

• As I am very busy over the Christmas break, there is a very good chance that this draft will not be continued written. --Kitabc12345 (talk) 07:21, 25 December 2020 (UTC)

Eminently understandable. Being all volunteers, we all know that effect. Best wishes for a good holiday season to you, Kitabc12345. --Pi zero (talk) 12:49, 25 December 2020 (UTC)

Expanded and added an update, but it will need a reviewer being available (and any authors being able to respond to the reviewer quickly) for publication. I will try to check for feedback as often as practically possible. Gryllida (talk) 22:10, 25 December 2020 (UTC)

Published. Chilean authorities report first COVID-19 outbreak in Antarctica

Hope they manage the numbers. Again thanks for volunteering with writing the story in the busy holiday times.

Regards, Gryllida (talk) 02:28, 27 December 2020 (UTC)

You are terribly overdue for this!!

This award is presented to new reporters who have started 10 or fewer news articles.

--Bddpaux (talk) 15:29, 26 March 2024 (UTC)

This is a largely lesser award, but you deserve it as well!

		The Order of the Humble Pencil For completing 5 edits.
		Great work! Keep it up!--Bddpaux (talk) 15:31, 26 March 2024 (UTC)