Talk:Merkel, Macron hold ceremonial meeting before 100th anniversary of World War I end

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Review of revision 4445607 [Passed][edit]

What the hell is the headline trying to say? "and" was not needed and a comma would have suffice, but "Macron", "Merkel", "Armistice Day"? How do you think it works for international audience, Pi?
103.254.128.86 (talk) 06:23, 14 November 2018 (UTC)
What would you suggest? (If it's a massive enough improvement, and suggested soon enough, it's still possible.) --Pi zero (talk) 12:36, 14 November 2018 (UTC)
How about "Merkel, Macron hold ceremonial meeting before 100th anniversary of World War I end"? --Pi zero (talk) 12:43, 14 November 2018 (UTC)
Sought feedback from someone off-line about this, since time is short. They felt it was a significant improvement, and re the imperfect conveyance of who those people are they remarked (and it is a valid point, if not taken too far), read the article. So I'm going for it. --Pi zero (talk) 15:03, 14 November 2018 (UTC)
@Gryllida, Acagastya: Done; anyone willing to sight the rename? --Pi zero (talk) 15:07, 14 November 2018 (UTC)