Talk:Philippines hit by Typhoon "Kiko" (Morakot), dozens killed
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Revision 858256 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:48, 8 August 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Could try using {{QuoteRight}} to highlight the quote, and {{Image source}} to highlight and credit the source of the image (even if free use, it is a nice courtesy). I see a bunch of one-sentence paragraphs - some of these could probably be merged and/or expanded upon. Could use an additional one sentence or two of background info at the bottom. Otherwise good stuff. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 858256 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:48, 8 August 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Could try using {{QuoteRight}} to highlight the quote, and {{Image source}} to highlight and credit the source of the image (even if free use, it is a nice courtesy). I see a bunch of one-sentence paragraphs - some of these could probably be merged and/or expanded upon. Could use an additional one sentence or two of background info at the bottom. Otherwise good stuff. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Possible title change with Taiwan
[edit]I strongly urge to move the title to include Taiwan (e.g. Philippines and Taiwan hit by Typhoon "Kiko" (Morakot), dozens killed). There are reliable reports from major media that there are at least six people in Taiwan killed by the typhoon. And there are major floods in southern Taiwan. See the sources provided below. I will try to add reports about Taiwan later in the article, but I urge a title change for now.
- From Yahoo news
- Voice of America report
- BBC report about the typhoon approaching Taiwan --98.154.26.247 (talk) (experienced editor at Wikipedia) 22:30, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
Hi there, it may be a good idea to do a follow up article with the new references and new title as it is a powerful storm.SriMesh | talk 02:37, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
- Please add / re-title this developing new story....Typhoon Morakot hits Taiwan resulting in several dead and injured despite preperations SriMesh | talk 04:06, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
- Please add / re-title this developing new story....Typhoon Morakot hits Taiwan resulting in several dead and injured despite preperations. SriMesh | talk 04:09, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
- Please add / re-title this developing new story....Typhoon Morakot hits Taiwan resulting in several dead and injured despite preperations SriMesh | talk 04:06, 9 August 2009 (UTC)