Talk:Police shoot man dead after 'terrorist-related' knife attack in London

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Quote farm[edit]

Right now, the article is nothing more than a quote farm, and we should try to be better than NYT in these things.
•–• 12:27, 3 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

LOL. Yeah, I know. I downloaded source pages few hours after the attack. At that time, reports were scarce. Since now a day has elapsed, I'll find more ellaborate srcs and incorporate them in article. --Don't call 911 (talk) 12:56, 3 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done! More background info added. (I'm gonna see what clean up needs to be done before submitting.) --Don't call 911 (talk) 14:13, 3 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Pull quotes must not be in the article if they are not present in the article text.
•–• 14:13, 3 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done! I will do preliminary fact-checking and then push the article for review. (You can expect to find me working on this for next hour.) --Don't call 911 (talk) 14:23, 3 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Review note[edit]

I've done some review, but for external reasons am unable to complete a review at this time — I have to sleep sometime.

  • Did prelim check against sources.
  • Satisfied the image, image caption, and pull-quote are sound, subject to verification of article body.
  • Addressed attribution, verification, and distance-from-source of the lede; struggled to do so within purview as an uninvolved reviewer, keeping in mind neither non-ready nor self-disqualification were attractive options. I'm pretty sure I've got the lede verified at this point (though I could easy seem myself rechecking it once more, to be safe).

--Pi zero (talk) 06:14, 5 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4545094 [Passed][edit]