Talk:Royal Navy evacuates UK citizens from Libya
Comments[edit]
Notes on a few things that need doing. Best guess atm, these are within range for a reviewer to take care of during review.
- Date format in Sources. Wikilinks using {{w}}. Infobox. Image (perhaps a file photo of HMS Enterprise?).
- Slightly more attribution here and there (comes under NPOV); for example, when describing motive, that's a claim and so should be attributed rather than asserted as fact (in that particular case, cautious adjustment of wording is called for, since the government statement does make the claim about increasing violence, but doesn't go back as far as 2011; probably inserting a sentence-break will work nicely).
Just small stuff; subject to some unanticipated problem during review (during source-check, one would imagine), this looks pretty sound. -Pi zero (talk) 21:07, 3 August 2014 (UTC)
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Revision 2785513 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:26, 4 August 2014 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Adding a new category[edit]
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Requested edit:Add article to category 2014 Libyan Conflict CSJJ104 (talk) 13:13, 1 September 2014 (UTC)
