Talk:Son of Indian hospital CEO commits suicide by jumping out of window

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Credit: The title of this page was proposed by AlexandrDmitri.

Rationales[edit]

The article's last two sources look unverifiable but have been published by Times of India newsprint. Therefore, they are verifiable. Also, GT hospital is not a short form but it is the actual name of the hospital and does not have any kind of full form. Srinivas 06:00, 16 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Some copyediting in bold[edit]

  • [..]He jumped from the building in front of her mother and she was shocked to see her son dying before her. Miten didn't leave a suicide note.

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  • At 21:00 the police received a call from the residents of the building saying that Miten had committed suicide in Maker Towers, Colaba. The police arrived there and took him to GT hospital but was declared dead on arrival.
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  • The autopsy report of GT hospital stated that severe head injuries were the reason for his death. His body was then moved to Lilavati Hospital.

--AlexandrDmitri (talk) 11:31, 16 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done Srinivas 11:48, 16 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 897724 [Passed][edit]