Talk:Tropical Storm Danny to threaten the U.S. East Coast this weekend

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Quote added. –Juliancolton | Talk 21:20, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

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Again, I have to comment that the title seems alarmist. "... to target US east coast" is a vast upgrade from one of the sources' "could threaten Long Island" and this alternative source which says "...threatening to spoil another Jersey Shore weekend". Cheers, --SVTCobra 01:24, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Changed to "threaten", which should hopefully alleviate your concerns. –Juliancolton | Talk 01:40, 27 August 2009 (UTC)