Talk:US drone strike kills at least fifteen in Pakistan
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[edit]Reads like a propaganda tract.
Is the US allowed to fly missile drones in Pakistan? - Amgine | t 15:30, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
- Alternate sources to consider:
- Please take particular note how they describe the targeted people. There is no consistency, but they range from 'militants' to 'opposition forces'. - Amgine | t 15:39, 17 January 2010 (UTC)
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VOA source
[edit]The VOA source doesn't seem to work. Fix it and I'll pass the article --RockerballAustralia (talk) 07:01, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
- Done Don't know how i missed that. Tempodivalse [talk] 13:11, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
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{{editprotected}} Category:Federally Administered Tribal Areas
- Done --Brian McNeil / talk 13:58, 29 January 2010 (UTC)