Talk:United States: Two dead in Kentucky high school shooting

Review of revision 4377897 [Not ready]

Revision 4377897 of this article has been reviewed by Green Giant (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:17, 24 January 2018 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: We need a source for the number of school kids (although alternatively we can remove that line). NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I made slight changes to the wording but otherwise you just need to address the source issue for the school enorllment. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4377897 of this article has been reviewed by Green Giant (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:17, 24 January 2018 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: We need a source for the number of school kids (although alternatively we can remove that line). NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I made slight changes to the wording but otherwise you just need to address the source issue for the school enorllment. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

The number of students enrolled came from the USA Today article. To double verify, I have been able to confirm the number with the Kentucky Department of Education. I am not listing it as a source, because of the nature of the site. This link and then select in the "School Report Card" section: County: Marshall, Year: 2016/2017, School: Marshall County High School. After submitting the form, a report is generated that does show 1374 students. However, there's no direct link. Hope this helps. Cheers, --SVTCobra 15:09, 24 January 2018 (UTC)

Review of revision 4377915 [Passed]

Revision 4377915 of this article has been reviewed by Green Giant (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:11, 24 January 2018 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Source provided. Not needed for the article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4377915 of this article has been reviewed by Green Giant (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:11, 24 January 2018 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Source provided. Not needed for the article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

@Green Giant: I've added the country to the lede (I left it pending review, though it seems pretty close to the self-sight-able line). The headline, though I'm sure we can live with it, might ideally have mentioned the country too; I would have been tempted to just say "Kentucky, US" there. --Pi zero (talk) 16:07, 24 January 2018 (UTC)

@Pi zero: Eh, the first words in the title are literally United States. --SVTCobra 16:21, 24 January 2018 (UTC)

@SVTCobra: Heh, and I usually don't even notice them there. (I'd usually rather integrate the country into the headline sentence.) --Pi zero (talk) 16:26, 24 January 2018 (UTC)

@Pi zero: Cheers. I think it’s fine to include the country in the lede unless perhaps it is somewhere really well known like New York. Green Giant (talk) 16:50, 24 January 2018 (UTC)