Talk:Apple unveils new MacBook Air laptops, iLife '11 software suite

Source

I realize this is still under development, but the source is old. --SVTCobra 23:42, 20 October 2010 (UTC)

This is my first article

so please be gentle.

Review of revision 1116712 [Failed]

Revision 1116712 of this article has been reviewed by Amgine (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:05, 21 October 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Not ready: Reads like a sales brochure or press release. There's no coverage of previous issues (like MacAir's failure to gain market traction) or criticisms (Apple backing down on iOs licensing/monopoly investigations) Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Well-enough written, but appears biased. It would be improved if the article included a larger examination of issues related to this release, especially the Mac Air's history, the iLife history. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1116712 of this article has been reviewed by Amgine (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:05, 21 October 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Not ready: Reads like a sales brochure or press release. There's no coverage of previous issues (like MacAir's failure to gain market traction) or criticisms (Apple backing down on iOs licensing/monopoly investigations) Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Well-enough written, but appears biased. It would be improved if the article included a larger examination of issues related to this release, especially the Mac Air's history, the iLife history. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1116750 [Failed]

Revision 1116750 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 09:22, 21 October 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Not ready: Not seeing enough significant changes since prior review regarding NPOV issues. Style: Not ready: Could use at least one highlighted quote. Really would be helped by adding a relevant free use picture. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1116750 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 09:22, 21 October 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Not ready: Not seeing enough significant changes since prior review regarding NPOV issues. Style: Not ready: Could use at least one highlighted quote. Really would be helped by adding a relevant free use picture. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1117847 [Passed]

Revision 1117847 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:13, 23 October 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: And it's all Fetchcomms' fault. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1117847 of this article has been reviewed by Diego Grez (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:13, 23 October 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: And it's all Fetchcomms' fault. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Image

@Green Giant: I'm confused about the status of the image on this (which I see you were the deleting admin for, when that happened). Is the image now under that name the same image as before, or isn't it? --Pi zero (talk) 17:55, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

@Pi zero: The current image is not the same as the original, which was a Flickr image that has been deleted from there too. It showed a Mac with a number of icons, a FaceTime conversation and part of a picture of a hand. To be honest the current picture is a better one. Green Giant (talk) 20:12, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Okay, thanks for clarifying. Not the original, so it doesn't go on the article. (Better is interesting, but of course doesn't factor in.) --Pi zero (talk) 20:20, 2 February 2018 (UTC)