Talk:Mockumentary Mister America has world premiere

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Original reporting[edit]

@Koavf: you tagged this as being a piece of original reporting. Can you post your notes here? Thanks, --DannyS712 (talk) 13:44, 5 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@DannyS712: c:Category:Mister America film premiere includes photos and audio that support every claim in this article. —Justin (koavf)❤T☮C☺M☯ 17:11, 5 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4519102 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4519102 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:59, 5 October 2019 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: See below.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • This is marked as original reporting, but there is (as another user remarked above) no documentation here on the talk page. To start with, what information in the article came by original research? (@Koavf)

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4519102 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:59, 5 October 2019 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: See below.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • This is marked as original reporting, but there is (as another user remarked above) no documentation here on the talk page. To start with, what information in the article came by original research? (@Koavf)

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
@Koavf: Please explain. Did you attend this event? What were the circumstances under which these materials were gathered? --Pi zero (talk) 17:26, 5 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Pi zero: Check your email. —Justin (koavf)❤T☮C☺M☯ 02:33, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I have (btw) received the aforementioned email. Have not yet had a chance to process it; mean to do so reasonably promptly. --Pi zero (talk) 16:27, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. I'm also working this weekend, so I don't have a lot of bandwidth. I appreciate you giving it a review. I would have written more if I had more time but I wanted to churn out an accurate, brief, piece of original reporting even if it meant that it wasn't comprehensive (i.e. trying to not make the perfect the enemy of the good). —Justin (koavf)❤T☮C☺M☯ 16:33, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Having processed the private communication, I'm comfortable with the bona fides of the materials on Commons. --Pi zero (talk) 16:56, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Presuming there's nothing else in the notes needed for review, I am going to start. --SVTCobra 22:38, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4519439 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4519439 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:51, 7 October 2019 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • WN:5Ws is important in the lede. The original lede buried the 'who', 'when' and 'what' and did not include the 'where' beyond the name of the theater.
  • There seems to have been some confusion between actor and character names. I had to resort to IMDB to sort it out.
  • A couple of facts (number of days of shooting and number of crew) were contradicted by the audio recording.
  • I confirmed the identity of the moderator via the official site (now listed in external links).
  • @Pi zero:, I added that Wikinews was in attendance. If this is inappropriate, remove at your earliest convenience.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4519439 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:51, 7 October 2019 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • WN:5Ws is important in the lede. The original lede buried the 'who', 'when' and 'what' and did not include the 'where' beyond the name of the theater.
  • There seems to have been some confusion between actor and character names. I had to resort to IMDB to sort it out.
  • A couple of facts (number of days of shooting and number of crew) were contradicted by the audio recording.
  • I confirmed the identity of the moderator via the official site (now listed in external links).
  • @Pi zero:, I added that Wikinews was in attendance. If this is inappropriate, remove at your earliest convenience.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
The phrasing seems reasonable to me. --Pi zero (talk) 01:18, 7 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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