Talk:Roman Herzog, former German president, dies aged 82
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Revision 4277815 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:46, 10 January 2017 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The leading paragraph does not answer where or how or why the death occurred. A source says "Current President Joachim Gauck announced Herzog's death on Tuesday, without giving details." Perhaps http://www.bundespraesident.de/SharedDocs/Berichte/DE/Joachim-Gauck/2017/01/170110-Kondolenz-Buehne.html could be linked as the official announcement, and the fact that person X made announcement Y in place Z could be included. https://www.thelocal.de/20170110/former-president-roman-herzog-dead-at-82 says "He died in the early hours of Tuesday in a hospital near his hometown in the southwestern state of Baden-Württemberg, a spokeswoman said." It would be nice to do a further sources search and find which spokeswoman that was, to further verify the fact. A further sources search to identify the death cause would be pertinent. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 4277815 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:46, 10 January 2017 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The leading paragraph does not answer where or how or why the death occurred. A source says "Current President Joachim Gauck announced Herzog's death on Tuesday, without giving details." Perhaps http://www.bundespraesident.de/SharedDocs/Berichte/DE/Joachim-Gauck/2017/01/170110-Kondolenz-Buehne.html could be linked as the official announcement, and the fact that person X made announcement Y in place Z could be included. https://www.thelocal.de/20170110/former-president-roman-herzog-dead-at-82 says "He died in the early hours of Tuesday in a hospital near his hometown in the southwestern state of Baden-Württemberg, a spokeswoman said." It would be nice to do a further sources search and find which spokeswoman that was, to further verify the fact. A further sources search to identify the death cause would be pertinent. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
I agree these would improve the article. However, it seems mighty harsh to dunk the article out of the review queue entirely for this. BRS (Talk) (Contribs) 14:04, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
Review of revision 4278023 [Passed]
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Revision 4278023 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:22, 11 January 2017 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4278023 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:22, 11 January 2017 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
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