Talk:US President Biden recognises Armenian killing as 'genocide'
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Revision 4617620 of this article has been reviewed by Acagastya (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:11, 27 April 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Thanks for the article, @JJLiu112:. There are a few things that I recall now -- there were certain important things like "becoming the first US president to do so", which were omitted. Some quotes were worded differently, which should not be the case. Ideally the external sources I have added to this article should have been listed as source, relying on the original source, which surprisingly AP got wrong. Re sister links, the problem of adding a tad bit too much opens up a window for not only this being way too encyclopædic, but chances of bias through ignorance or omission. Please go through the history of the article. Cheers! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4617620 of this article has been reviewed by Acagastya (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:11, 27 April 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Thanks for the article, @JJLiu112:. There are a few things that I recall now -- there were certain important things like "becoming the first US president to do so", which were omitted. Some quotes were worded differently, which should not be the case. Ideally the external sources I have added to this article should have been listed as source, relying on the original source, which surprisingly AP got wrong. Re sister links, the problem of adding a tad bit too much opens up a window for not only this being way too encyclopædic, but chances of bias through ignorance or omission. Please go through the history of the article. Cheers! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
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{{editprotected}} "On Saturday, the US president Joe Biden" should be "On Saturday, US president Joe Biden", and "When running for last year's US presidential election" should be "When running in last year's US presidential election". Heavy Water (talk) 23:02, 8 February 2023 (UTC)
- To clarify what I meant in the second point, one runs in an election, and for an office. Heavy Water (talk) 23:09, 8 February 2023 (UTC)
