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-- Wikinews Welcome (talk) 05:33, 20 February 2019 (UTC)

Welcome, I hope you enjoy being part of Wikinews! Keep contributing; your work is very appreciated. Qwerty number1 (talk) 13:07, 20 February 2019 (UTC)

India Launches CYPAD sources fill

Hello Wikiexpert1234567 :-)

For the article please click here to edit the sources section, add this content:

== Sources == 

*{{source
|url=https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/city/delhi/dwarka-to-house-indias-first-hi-tech-forensic-lab/articleshow/68054700.cms
|title=Dwarka to house India’s first hi-tech forensic lab
|author=TNN
|pub=Times of India
|date=February 19, 2018
}}
*{{source
|url=https://www.dailypioneer.com/2019/state-editions/rajnath-singh-inaugurates-cypad--ncfl-in-dwarka.html
|title=Rajnath Singh inaugurates CyPAD, NCFL in Dwarka
|author=
|publisher=Daily Pioneer
|date=February 19, 2018
}}

Then you no longer need inline links in the article body, they can be removed. Please let me know if you need any help.

--Gryllida (talk) 09:43, 20 February 2019 (UTC)

India Launches CYPAD place?

Hello Wikiexpert1234567

1) It would be great to include the place of the ceremony in the first paragraph.

2) We can not copy any passages from sources, please rewrite the second sentence in the first paragraph.

Again please let me know if you need any help. --Gryllida (talk) 09:48, 20 February 2019 (UTC)

Did you save your edit?

At India Launches CYPAD none of the problems raised above have been addressed, this is really not appropriate to publish the article in its present form. Please address these problems and ensure the edit is fully saved so that others can see what you have changed. --Gryllida (talk) 05:18, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

YES JUST DID THAT.. PLEASE CHECK ONCE MORE.. THANKS

Thank you Wikiexpert1234567 :)

I think the formatting improved a lot, I fixed the sources formatting now for you.

Could you please rewrite the first paragraph in your own words and add the place. I think this is required for publication.

--Gryllida (talk) 09:57, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

DONE!! :)... JUST EDIT THE HEADLINE PLEASE

Nice, thanks, moved to India launches Cyber Protection, Awareness and Detection Center in Dwarka now Gryllida (talk) 10:36, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

Hi, sorry to interrupt, but please add comments like 'please move page' on the discussion page. Thanks and welcome, Qwerty number1 (talk) 10:45, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

The page has been moved already right? Please check..

JP Morgan Chase Becomes first US Bank to lauch a Cryptocurrency

Hi Wikiexpert1234567 :-)

Can you please write the article contents in the past tense instead of the present? I think this is required for publication.

--Gryllida (talk) 02:46, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

sources fileld

You may wish to add this to the sources section and remove links from the article body:

* {{source
|url = https://www.forbes.com/sites/madhvimavadiya/2019/02/17/jp-morgans-cryptocurrency-jpm-coin-is-not-a-cryptocurrency/#785b6aa421d1
|author = Madhvi Mavadiya
|title = Stop Calling JPMorgan's JPM Coin A Cryptocurrency, Because It's Not
|date = February 17, 2019
|publisher = Forbes
}}
* {{source
|url = https://www.jpmorgan.com/global/news/digital-coin-payments
|title = J.P. Morgan Creates Digital Coin for Payments
|date = February 14, 2019
|pub = J.P. Morgan
}}
* {{source
|url = https://www.nytimes.com/2019/02/14/business/dealbook/jpmorgan-cryptocurrency-bitcoin.html?rref=collection%2Ftimestopic%2FBitcoin&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics&region=stream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=2&pgtype=collection
|title = JPMorgan Chase Moves to Be First Big U.S. Bank With Its Own Cryptocurrency
|pub=New York Times
|author = Michael J. de la Merced and Nathaniel Popper
|date = February 14, 2019
}}

--Gryllida (talk) 02:49, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Lack of freshness

I think the main event here is "US Bank JP Morgan lauches a cryptocurrency, JPM Coin, for the first time in US". This seems to have happened on February 14? If so, this news is now no longer fresh -- over a week ago. I'm not sure what to do here, perhaps a refresh is possible, but only if a more recent event occurs. I hope I am not mistaken here in this assessment of dates.

As a tip, when writing a news article, I'd suggest to check the "what, when" as a first step. --Gryllida (talk) 02:53, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Ok.

Should I drop the article?

If you can't find any fresh developments like something related happening more recently, I guess that is a yes. Alternatively you could do an interview if you are very interested in this particular topic (list what questions to ask in that case), otherwise creating a new story may be a bit easier Gryllida (talk) 07:31, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Why don't you write an article about the summit at the Vatican over sex abuse, the ID of Alesha MacPhail's murderer being revealed or John Mcdonnel saying labour is 'moving towards' a second referendum on Brexit? Qwerty number1 (talk) 17:30, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

India launches Cyber Protection, Awareness and Detection Center in Dwarka

Hi. Some concerns from the previous review were addressed. However, substantial problems remain. It looks as if there may not be time remaining in which to address these; news is like that — it's been remarked that publishing an article on Wikinews is like creating a Wikipedia article from scratch and bringing it up to good article status within a period of no more than one or two days; our techniques for streamlining things do help a great deal, and it gets much easier once you get the hang of it, but it can take some practice to get used to, at first. See my review comments. --Pi zero (talk) 19:43, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Timing

Re India launches Cyber Protection, Awareness and Detection Center in Dwarka

Did you submit it to review by mistake?? Could you please unsubmit as I think the event happened over a week ago

--Gryllida (talk) 10:40, 28 February 2019 (UTC)

Re: JPM Coin Expanding to 220 Banks for Payments

Hi Wikiexpert1234567!

Where did you learn about this story? Was it in one of these sources?

• Daniel Palmer. "JPMorgan Expanding Blockchain Project With 220 Banks to Include Payments - CoinDesk" — CoinDesk, April 22, 2019
• Carl T. "JP Morgan Expands Blockhain Payment Services to 220 Banks via Interbank Information Network" — BitcoinExchange Guide, April 22, 2019
• Thomas Simms. "JPMorgan Chase to Add New Features to Blockchain-Powered Network for Global Banks" — Coin Telegraph, April 22, 2019

Could you please clarify this. And write one paragraph answering the who, what, where, when, why, and how. Let me know if you need any assistance.

To reply please click here.

--Gryllida (talk) 21:34, 22 April 2019 (UTC)

Question

Hi Gryllida, Hi, Yes I found out from these and more related articles Who: JP Morgan Chase Bank getting into crypto and blockchain. Sources New York Times, Bloomberg, FT, etc What: Blockchain technology and ironic move by JP Morgan and Jamie Dimon Where: US When and How: JPM Coin was announced earlier this year but the follow up expansion plan was announced yesterday. Source FT Bloomberg and CNBC

Thanks Hope things are fine and in place. If you think improvements are required, please let me know. Sid

--Wikiexpert1234567 (talk) 00:40, 23 April 2019 (UTC)

Cool, thanks. I think as Pi zero said in his review, you should add the date 'yesterday' and a description of how and who announced the expansion plan into the first paragraph. Gryllida (talk) 04:23, 23 April 2019 (UTC)

In the previous message I've suggested that the first paragraph needs improvements. Do you plan to work on it, Wikiexpert1234567? Gryllida (talk) 00:38, 24 April 2019 (UTC)

JPM Coin Expanding to 220 Banks for Payments

Hi. There were significant difficulties on review; see my review comments, as well as (always) detailed history of edits during review. --Pi zero (talk) 02:14, 23 April 2019 (UTC)